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Post by Jag Starblade on Mar 31, 2015 4:40:55 GMT
I really like the title. It really did make me pick up the book (or at least click the link, in this case).
In the line: The room is empty partially empty, take out the first 'empty'.
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Esmerelda
Flet Soldier
we've made it this far kid
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Post by Esmerelda on Mar 31, 2015 16:40:20 GMT
Thanks Jag! Fixed it.
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Post by Lady Lessien on Apr 8, 2015 23:53:31 GMT
Ahh! You're doing OYAN too! And I looove the scene!
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Post by Aarathyn on Apr 12, 2015 20:40:00 GMT
Ooh, I like it!
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